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For all teenagers. What do you think of my writing?

sweaty — Sun, 05 Feb 2012 17:26:00 +0000

Question by : For all teenagers. What do you think of my writing?
Ethan ran into the living room with kelvin behind him, carrying the smashed cake.

” Mr. Gustave…,” Kelvin yelled from the middle of the living room.

Ethan elbowed Kelvin. ‘Don’t make a scene,”

“What, happened?” Mrs Gustave came running out of the kitchen, “for god’s sake, are you ok?”

She examined Ethan. “why are you yelling Kelvin?”

“It’s Ethan,” He said, ” something strange happened on our way home, we..”

“stop it now,” Mr gustave came in, ” do you want to give an explanation to the smashed cake,
fine we’ll bring another one, but stay calm.”

” no,” Kelvin said, ” it’s not about the cake, it’s about.”

He stopped and eyed Ethan as if taking his permission to speak. ” it’ about Ethan, he can heal wounded things with his singing voice.”

” what ?” Ramsey threw the strap of colored papers from his hand, ” are you kidding me? He
can’t even make a couple of eggs, he just hopless.”

Ramsey and quentin laughed.

” no,” kelvin said, ” i’m not lying. Fine, wait….”

Kelvin ran to the kitchen. He came back with a knife.

” look,” he ran the knife across his palm, and everyone watched as the blood dripped down the
carpet.

” are you crazy?” Gustav yelled at kelvin,” why are you hurting yourself?”

” Go on Ethan,” Kelvin yelled, ” show them.”

Ethan swallowed and walked to the middle of the living room. His body shivered. What if his voice didn’t heal Kelvin’s wound. He’d look very bad infront of his parents and ramsey would keep on making jokes about him for the coming three years.
” Stabat mater.
dolorosa, juxta crucem
eh lacrimosa.”

Ethan’s voice shifted to the high, boy soprano register. His shoulders shook and his forhead got sweaty.

kelvin’s wound started stitching itself up, as if an invisible needle and thread ran through his skin.

Ethan finished singing, and kelvin raised his palm in the air. ” do you see,” he said, turning in a circle, ” spick and span.”

Quentin jumped from the sofa and grasped Kelvin’s hand. ” you’re lying, Ethan did nothing, you didn’t wound yourself from the beginning. It’s a cheap trick.”

” shut up,” Kelvin pulled his hand back. ” you’re just jealous because Ethan can do something other than walking around and stealing things.”

” do you mean me?” Quentin shoved kelvin in the shoulder, but Ethan got in and pulled Quentin back. ” we don’t want a fight here,”

Mr and Mrs Gustav were eyeing each other. There jaws dropped to their necks. Elma’s prophecy got fulfilled. One of their children will have a magical power that will shape the future of redville village, and this child was Ethan.

( this a scene from chapter three.)

it’s for ages 9-12

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Answer by ^kisses and hearts?
I am twelve and you made a lot of grammar mistakes, you should of did the plot a little more interesting sorry you have a lot to learn.

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ok this is for boys and girls!!!?

sweaty — Mon, 30 Jan 2012 17:26:07 +0000

Question by Sleeps with the Fishes.: ok this is for boys and girls!!!?
ok i’m a girl and if i never met you before and i’m introducing myself to you and you want to give me a handshake how would u respond to me saying “um….i’m kinda hot and sweaty now..so i’d doubt you’d want to shake my hand”

what if i shook your hand and i said “sorry i have sweaty palms! ”
i have clammy hands sometimes which is super embarrassing but which would you think would be more exceptional to say to ppl when they want to give me a handshake?

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Answer by Paolo
i would give you a handshake and say nice to meet you :0

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was this a turn off for this guy?

sweaty — Sat, 28 Jan 2012 17:29:46 +0000

Question by woahh, hello: was this a turn off for this guy?
ohkay… so i was at the movies with my “sorta kinda boyfriend” and i was laying on his shoulder and he had his arm around me, and he was about to grab my hand to hold it, and i moved my hand, cuz my hand was lyke… rele sweaty because i was so nervous…. and he was like “Why don’t you want to hold my hand?” and i just shook my head. i didnt want him holding it because it was so sweaty…. would this be a turn off for him?

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Answer by Coco Rose
Its not really a turn off… he probably thought he’d gone too far and is a bit confused now. I think you should explain what happened and ease his mind.

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Q&A: Ok to Jehovah’s Witnesses who regularly answer at meetings…..?

sweaty — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 17:29:26 +0000

Question by mariebabii: Ok to Jehovah’s Witnesses who regularly answer at meetings…..?
Ok so just to start off saying…..I am INCREDIBLY SHY. I never raise my hand for anything at school. When we have to do oral reports I have mild panic attacks were my hands get really sweaty and my heart starts to beat really fast and I feel like I’m going to faint. I NEVER answer at the congregation meetings because there are at least 90 people in attendance on average at each meeting and that is 100000000 times worst than when I’m in a class room so I just can’t bring myself to comment at the meetings!!!!!!!!! It’s so never recking because I know the answers to the questions and sometimes the brothers at the podium look at me to answer or they say ,” looking for that new hand….” and I feel like I have to answer!!!! What makes it even worst is that I just got baptized and I’m afriad I’ll look like a loser if I don’t answer!!!!. What should I do, I really need some advie here….

thanks

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Answer by Ingrid “
just relax, hold your breath and raise your hand ! lol if your picked just answer the question, and the more you answer the less nervous you’ll be. answer mine please-http://answers.yahoo.com/question/ask;_ylt=AtEVfyU3CdYB5tFv8eXruoAPzKIX;_ylv=3

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Why do hometown pizza shop employees handle food without gloves?

sweaty — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 17:27:00 +0000

Question by um-kay: Why do hometown pizza shop employees handle food without gloves?
I order pizza at least once a week and while waiting for my pizza to be prepared I began to think to myself “man I hope these people washed their hands.” I could see them grabbing handfulls of cheese and dropping it onto the pizzas and others pressing dough into pans with their bare hands. Why do they not wear gloves? It is kinda nasty. Is this a health violation? I used to work as a sample person for a cheese store at the mall and even we had to wear gloves. I saw the one girl wipe her sweaty head with a rag and then continue to press dough with the rag laying right beside the dough pan. It’s just grose.
this eatery places the cheese on the pizza after it has cooked and serves it not melted. They scooped the cheese with their bare hands and sprinkle it on top and then place peperoni again uncooked on top.

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Answer by Sam
They should be wearing gloves, and I would report the indecent to the management. I would also chose not to order from that place any longer.

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Writing a book……?

sweaty — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 17:35:25 +0000

Question by Dancemarcher: Writing a book……?
Here is an excerpt from my book. I’m 13. Be as harsh as you want to. Lille clutched at the wall with her sweaty, clammy hands, trying not to pass out. She didn’t know where she was. “I must be hallucinating,” she thought. But she wasn’t. This was real. Her mom was walking toward her, her arms open and tears streaming down her face. Except: except this wasn’t the mom she remembered. Her mom had a warm demeanor like a crackling fire on a chilly day. This woman was cold and awful. She was whiter than a snowflake falling on the ground. Lille started shouting, but no words came out. She had gone deaf and mute at the same time. All she could hear was a familiar sound, so distant that it was barely recognizable. It would have been all for the better if this tune was indistinguishable. For, at that moment, Lille knew what it was as her mom clutched her with her thin hands. “Why are you doing this to me?!” Lille shouted as she realized that her voice had come back to her.
“Lille clutched at the wall with her sweaty, clammy hands, trying not to pass out. She didn’t know where she was. “I must be hallucinating,” she thought. But she wasn’t. This was real. Her mom was walking toward her, her arms open and tears streaming down her face. Except this wasn’t the mom she remembered. Her mom had a warm demeanor like a crackling fire on a chilly day. This woman was whiter than a snowflake falling on the ground. Lille started shouting, but no words came out. She had gone deaf and mute at the same time. All she could hear was a familiar sound, so distant that it was barely recognizable. It would have been all for the better if this tune was indistinguishable. For, at that moment, Lille knew what it was as her mom clutched her with her thin hands. “Why are you doing this to me?!” Lille shouted as she realized that her voice had come back to her.”
I revised it according to your advice. Also this isn’t a thought, so I wouldn’t put it in italics.
Maria: I also know about the dialogue. My computer was being funny and wouldn’t let me enter.
Everyone: All of your input was greatly appreciated.

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Answer by Beth
Wow, this is pretty good! The only thing that I’m not sure about is the “Except: except” part. I’m not sure how grammatically correct that bit is. But other than that I like it. Good luck writing!

Ps. Is this a dream? it doesn’t seem like things are naturally happening. You ought to post more, I’m really interested.

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I’ve been wondering?????????

sweaty — Fri, 20 Jan 2012 17:30:57 +0000

Question by Dancemarcher: I’ve been wondering?????????
Here is an excerpt from my book. I’m 13. Be as harsh as you want to. Lille clutched at the wall with her sweaty, clammy hands, trying not to pass out. She didn’t know where she was. “I must be hallucinating,” she though. But she wasn’t. This was real. Her mom was walking toward her, her arms open and tears streaming down her face. Except, except this wasn’t the mom she remembered. Her mom had a warm demeanor like a crackling fire on a chilly day. This woman was cold and awful. She was whiter than a snowflake falling on the ground. Lille started shouting, except no words came out. She had gone deaf and mute at the same time. All she could hear was a familiar sound, so distant that it was barely recognizable. It would have been all for the better if this song was indistinguishable. For, at that moment, Lille knew what that tune was as her mom clutched her with her thin hands. “Why are you doing this to me?!” Lille shouted as she realized that her voice had come back to her

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Answer by Stargirl
Pretty good, it would probably keep my attention.

Quick question though: Why is this under hair?

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Q&A: What do you think of these names?

sweaty — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 17:28:17 +0000

Question by Dancemarcher: What do you think of these names?
Here is an excerpt from my book. I’m 13. Be as harsh as you want to. Lille clutched at the wall with her sweaty, clammy hands, trying not to pass out. She didn’t know where she was. “I must be hallucinating,” she though. But she wasn’t. This was real. Her mom was walking toward her, her arms open and tears streaming down her face. Except, except this wasn’t the mom she remembered. Her mom had a warm demeanor like a crackling fire on a chilly day. This woman was cold and awful. She was whiter than a snowflake falling on the ground. Lille started shouting, except no words came out. She had gone deaf and mute at the same time. All she could hear was a familiar sound, so distant that it was barely recognizable. It would have been all for the better if this song was indistinguishable. For, at that moment, Lille knew what that tune was as her mom clutched her with her thin hands. “Why are you doing this to me?!” Lille shouted as she realized that her voice had come back to her
Thanks for you input Chad! I actually came up with this name from a book. Lille means little. In Copenhagen, Denmark, there is a Lille Havfrue, a Little Mermaid. In my book, Lille is the character’s name, and Havfrue is the town where she lives. Lille is pronounced just how it look. The name isn’t Lily, but rather Lil. I thought Lily sounded to cutesy, and Lille sounded not as cutesy. Because in our language Lil is just used a nickname, I decided to use another language instead. Thanks again Chad.

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Answer by Chad F
You have to be careful when you use alternate spellings of names. Is it supposed to be pronounced “Lil” or “Lilly”. This can be very confusing for readers. I know giving a unique name is great for making a memorable character, but at the same time, if someone has to ask themself, “How do I pronounce this?”, then most likely you should try for another name, or a more recognizable variation.

How do you think Ghoti is pronounced?
Using English spelling practices, it can actually be pronounced “Fish”

gh – tough – f
o – in some instances, a short o is pronounced as a short i
ti – ambition – sh

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sweaty — Mon, 16 Jan 2012 17:28:10 +0000

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What would is a good joke?

sweaty — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 17:30:01 +0000

Question by Dancemarcher: What would is a good joke?
Here is an excerpt from my book. I’m 13. Be as harsh as you want to. Lille clutched at the wall with her sweaty, clammy hands, trying not to pass out. She didn’t know where she was. “I must be hallucinating,” she though. But she wasn’t. This was real. Her mom was walking toward her, her arms open and tears streaming down her face. Except, except this wasn’t the mom she remembered. Her mom had a warm demeanor like a crackling fire on a chilly day. This woman was cold and awful. She was whiter than a snowflake falling on the ground. Lille started shouting, except no words came out. She had gone deaf and mute at the same time. All she could hear was a familiar sound, so distant that it was barely recognizable. It would have been all for the better if this song was indistinguishable. For, at that moment, Lille knew what that tune was as her mom clutched her with her thin hands. “Why are you doing this to me?!” Lille shouted as she realized that her voice had come back to her.
Brainz. What are you talking about? Ouch and ew? You’re expected to tell me what you think of the book. Or you just stop saying stupid answers. Then you wouldn’t be expected to do anything.
lol. Thanks so much Katiebug! I do that too. I’ll consider that when writing for now on.
Also, Katiebug, this is in the middle of my book. It leads to another very conversational part. But most of my book is very talkative. I’ll try to add my talking between the characters.
Thanks so much Afro Chic! Yeah, I’m only 13. I’ll be turning 14 in a few months, though. Thanks for the support!
Thanks so much RoRo. It is my dream job but it probably isn’t likely. haha.

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Answer by Brainz
Ouch! Eww! What are we expected to do? Why are you doing this to yourself???.

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